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Roses  bleed red.

Violets bruise blue.

Sugar is bitter.

And I am too.
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This is just something I came up with when I was trying to think of a good parody of the good old stand by. Sorry if it's not very witty.
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~NotenSMSK Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hmm... the first two lines are quite witty :) but it doesn't continue onwards like that. Still a nice approach and attempt! I hope it you can work on the last two lines :)
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~megalotty1998 Jan 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank for the feed back ^^ I'll consider going back and revising it.
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~NotenSMSK Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome :) Keep writing!
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~megalotty1998 Jan 9, 2013  Student General Artist
i will :)
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~NotenSMSK Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Although you are senior then me lol, if you need help regarding dA in general you can ask me :) also, you should add work to more groups :D
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~megalotty1998 Jan 9, 2013  Student General Artist
well do :) I'll try that
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